Before the last minute passes by of the day
I have few things to sayIt’s about me
I feel it’s about things I can clearly seeToday for many it was just another day
I know for me it was a special dayThinking about things that I happened to do
I give each a thought and spare a second or twoWith lots of rights and wrongs on the list
I just lie there and quietly assistSeldom satisfied with the effort I make
I somewhere know the importance of the small steps I takeJudging the distance from my goal
I make sure I don’t miss the wholeSo many things that can go wrong
I know it’s bound to happen when the path is longWith hope for things to happen right
I have my eyes set on a distant sightAgain there are things which I happen to completely ignore
I promise myself that tomorrow I will exploreBy now the mind wanders like a kid in the park
I go deeper and deeper by each breath in the darkDreams are things that don’t easily come to me
I am the one who likes to imagine and seeLater when I open my eyes
I realize outside I have the blue skiesIt’s now when I spare a thought and say
I hope I walk the talk today- Akky
akki didnt know u could write poems
i must say its a commendable effort
at night u become creative
really liked it …
keep writing more
Melanie
a budding shakespeare, eh?
you ought to publish that in some college rag!
@Melanie: i get creative sitting at home.. ;-) :p
@anonymous: :p… r u sure ?
:p:p:p:p
:p
What is it with guys getting either geeky or brimming with hearts full of poems, that too originals?!
You re the fifth (geek) guy I ve seen turning to poetry.
God! Save us!
Ahem. Btw, nice one that. :P
fifth …? geek :p
who are the four…?
i guess i knw a couple of them …(pascal..nitin…rt?)
Heh. yeah.
The other two are people you dont know.
1.i M iN dEsPrAtE nEeD oF help
Monday, March 28, 2005 6:24 PM
2.SaMe oLd StOrY
Tuesday, May 17, 2005 2:05 AM
3.ViVa RhYmE(Just 4 Lines)
Sunday, May 08, 2005 2:04 AM
4.i LiKe…
Saturday, August 20, 2005 12:29 AM
5.LoRi in GuJuRaTi ….!
Wednesday,September 07,2005 1:44 AM
6.am i wrong…
Thursday, October 27, 2005 4:25 PM
7.I m …
Monday, October 24, 2005 11:45 PM
8.SaMpLe sAys…
Saturday, November 12, 2005 10:34 PM
9.Introspection…
Thursday,February 16, 2006 12:19 AM
–Akshay Surve
–Superman Publications! ;-)
How about launching it? :p
Muahahahahahah.
I would want a reviewers copy then. :P
@rohit: nice idea dude.. :p BTW it wud be SoOoPerMaN :p
@Barkha: yup sure… reviewers copy + invitation at its release + a spl edition autographed copy…!
yup,i’ll like a copy of those poems too….!
-Suchitra
[...] browsing through some of my older posts and came across this rhyme I posted nearly two years back which still holds true for [...]
A nice composition. :)
:)
gud u let ur tongue think :)
ok :p