Before the last minute passes by of the day
I have few things to say

It’s about me
I feel it’s about things I can clearly see

Today for many it was just another day
I know for me it was a special day

Thinking about things that I happened to do
I give each a thought and spare a second or two

With lots of rights and wrongs on the list
I just lie there and quietly assist

Seldom satisfied with the effort I make
I somewhere know the importance of the small steps I take

Judging the distance from my goal
I make sure I don’t miss the whole

So many things that can go wrong
I know it’s bound to happen when the path is long

With hope for things to happen right
I have my eyes set on a distant sight

Again there are things which I happen to completely ignore
I promise myself that tomorrow I will explore

By now the mind wanders like a kid in the park
I go deeper and deeper by each breath in the dark

Dreams are things that don’t easily come to me
I am the one who likes to imagine and see

Later when I open my eyes
I realize outside I have the blue skies

It’s now when I spare a thought and say
I hope I walk the talk today


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17 Replies to “Introspection…”

  1. akki didnt know u could write poems
    i must say its a commendable effort
    at night u become creative
    really liked it …
    keep writing more

  2. What is it with guys getting either geeky or brimming with hearts full of poems, that too originals?!

    You re the fifth (geek) guy I ve seen turning to poetry.

    God! Save us!

    Ahem. Btw, nice one that. 😛

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    –Akshay Surve

    –Superman Publications! 😉

    How about launching it? :p

  4. @rohit: nice idea dude.. :p BTW it wud be SoOoPerMaN :p

    @Barkha: yup sure… reviewers copy + invitation at its release + a spl edition autographed copy…!

  5. Well written Akki ! Though I am not sure the word ‘skies’ is correct…I think you used it to merely rhyme with eyes 😛
    You just proved an idle mind need not be the devil’s workshop 😛

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