Akshay Surve

To Paradise and Back

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To the late night balmy breeze and
the morning sunshine,
I dearly missed them
all this time.

To the lazy ducks and
the skinny peacocks,
it was really nice to meet
for the first time.

I am just back from
a trip to paradise
and now I wonder, why?

- Akky

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7 comments
  1. Manish Agrawal says: March 20, 20099:39 am

    Kya baat hai POET!

  2. Simonn says: March 22, 20095:57 am

    I would like to get further info.Thank you.

  3. Shruti says: March 26, 200910:30 pm

    Hey the best part of the poem was the last line …and now I wonder, why? Good question ??? :)

    • Akshay Surve says: May 18, 20091:46 pm

      Believe me, I wrote the first two paras only for the last two lines ;)

  4. [...] The next day we got up late, had a late lunch and headed straight to Pawna dam. The drive to Pawna dam was exciting with steep slopes and blind curves. The lake, boating, the ducks, peacocks and the sunset was just the perfect setting for spending ones Sunday evening. No doubt it inspired me to write this few weeks back. [...]

  5. To Paradise and Back (again) » Akshay Surve says: August 17, 201011:28 am

    [...] To Paradise and Back [...]

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