Akshay Surve

6 Comments

1. ankur wrote:

   i dont know … sounds like a haiku … good going

   Posted on 14-Feb-07 at 5:57 am | Permalink
2. admin wrote:

   @ankur: hey, would be comming up with a haiku version soon. :p

   Modifying it would be interesting… :P

   Posted on 14-Feb-07 at 5:58 am | Permalink
3. Sampada wrote:

   though love starts unknowingly, it fades ONLY IF U WANT IT TO…..love can last forever…..its up to u whether u wanna go ahead and make it a success or u wanna stop & end it halfway….ur choice whether u make it or break it. Good Luck to u!

   Posted on 14-Feb-07 at 5:59 am | Permalink
4. admin wrote:

   @Sampada: Hey this is only what I feel (or what I can think of) as I hav never experienced all of this first hand.

   Also, its incomplete ;-) Its only half the story… may be even lesser or a small part of it.

   Let me try and complete it…

   Starts unknowingly,
   Flourishes skeptically,
   Culminates decidedly
   and then…
   Fades gradually.
   Deserts you reasonably,
   Unless you burnish it regularly.

   is it better now?

   Posted on 14-Feb-07 at 5:59 am | Permalink
5. visitor wrote:

   hi, have you heard a song named “Life is wonderful” -by Jason Mraz? it says/sings:

   it takes no time to fall in love
   But it takes you years to know what love is
   It takes some fears to make you trust
   It takes those tears to make it rust
   It takes the dust to have it polished

   yours is good too :) keep writing

   Posted on 14-Feb-07 at 5:59 am | Permalink
6. Arlen Jackson wrote:

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   Posted on 13-Nov-08 at 9:42 am | Permalink

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