Akshay Surve

i dont know … sounds like a haiku … good going

@ankur: hey, would be comming up with a haiku version soon. :p

Modifying it would be interesting… :P

though love starts unknowingly, it fades ONLY IF U WANT IT TO…..love can last forever…..its up to u whether u wanna go ahead and make it a success or u wanna stop & end it halfway….ur choice whether u make it or break it. Good Luck to u!

@Sampada: Hey this is only what I feel (or what I can think of) as I hav never experienced all of this first hand.

Also, its incomplete ;-) Its only half the story… may be even lesser or a small part of it.

Let me try and complete it…

Starts unknowingly,
Flourishes skeptically,
Culminates decidedly
and then…
Fades gradually.
Deserts you reasonably,
Unless you burnish it regularly.

is it better now?

hi, have you heard a song named “Life is wonderful” -by Jason Mraz? it says/sings:

it takes no time to fall in love
But it takes you years to know what love is
It takes some fears to make you trust
It takes those tears to make it rust
It takes the dust to have it polished

yours is good too :) keep writing