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Posted October 24th, 2005. Filed under All I Am | Email This Post

I am unhappy,
bcoz i cant keep everyone happy.

I am quiet,
bcoz i know i am not right.

I am unsatisfied,
bcoz i never expected myself to hide.

I am not ready to stand,
bcoz no one seems to understand.

I feel the shame,
bcoz i am to be blamed.

I am sorry,
bcoz i wrote my own sad story.

I am not crying,
bcoz i am still trying.

- Akky


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5 Responses so far

  1. Pascal says:

    good one dude!!

    Very true for me too! Last line is the best.

  2. rohit says:

    Cant comment much, but can say only this “Good One!”

  3. Sampada says:

    I am unhappy,
    bcoz i cant keep everyone happy.

    - wrong. u can never be unhappy. and keeping others happy-thats ur speciality(baye haath ka khel hai!)

    I am quiet,
    bcoz i know i am not right.

    - wrong. u r always right,right?

    I am unsatisfied,
    bcoz i never expected myself to hide.

    - i guess everything is fine around u. god knows y u r unsatisfied!

    I am not ready to stand,
    bcoz no one seems to understand.

    - u can stand re. ur best friends(suchitra,rohit,melanie,manav,vanessa etc etc) can understand u very well.

    I feel the shame,
    bcoz i am to be blamed.

    - no re dont blame urself for no reasons at all!

    I am sorry,
    bcoz i wrote my own sad story.

    - U & SAD!!!!!!!! CANT DIGEST THIS!

    I am not crying,
    bcoz i am still trying.

    - right. crying and all doesnt suit u. and again god knows wot r u TRYING!

  4. Akky says:

    LoL… good one !!!

    its called dissection and its one of the foolish reasons i dint join HSC Science.

    bt now i njoy it i guess!

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